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Help me look through them and tell me what you think? ;_; I need critique on Setz's history especially.
Setsuna F. Seiei
OOC Information
Player's Name/Nickname: Tari
Age: 18
Journal: ratiosu
AIM or Email:
AIM – amethyst bunny
E-mail – messiah_dragonair@yahoo.com.sg
RP Experience:
-3 years of LJ RPing
-Currently playing Setsuna F. Seiei, Neena Trinity and Rollo Lamperouge at Purgatorium
Character Information
Name: Setsuna F. Seiei
Series/Fandom: Mobile Suit Gundam 00
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Setsuna is bisexual, but he leans a lot closer to heterosexuality.
Student or Faculty Member/Professor: Student, Year 1
Major: Engineering
Minor: -
Occupation: -
Appearance:
Standing at 162 cm and sporting an untidy mop of black hair, the lean young man does not stand out very much in a crowd. At first glance, his most striking physical features are his maroon eyes. Most of the time, his eyes and slim eyebrows are set in an aloof glance and his lips, a perpetual frown. Setsuna’s face usually does not betray his feelings but when he cracks, it is his eyes that show his true emotions.
He is often seen wearing a long-sleeved, collared white shirt paired with dark pants and black shoes, as well as a tight black sash around his waist. He sports a scarf, either a red or an off-white one, around his neck out of habit. On colder days, he wears a thin dark blue jacket over his shirt to keep himself warm.
Personality:
”Don’t touch me!!”
Setsuna is a taciturn individual who only speaks when talked to. He is slow in trusting others, preferring to rely on himself instead in dealing with problems. He does not have much interaction skills to speak of, and as a result, he does not have many friends. Setsuna also has issues with being physically touched and does not enjoy any sort of invasion into his private space. The young man holds a rather cynical view towards life.
April 7 – Aries
Setsuna does not believe in the use of diplomatic approaches to any arguments and would rather go head on with any confrontation with force. While he is quite capable of receiving instructions and obeying them, his attitude is very much “do first, explain later”. Due to his rashness, he often gets into trouble with family members and classmates alike.
History:
Setsuna was born as Soran Ibrahim to a businessman and a homemaker. He led a normal and happy childhood, until he lost his parents in a car crash. Placing their only son in the care of a good friend, they had left home, looking forward to a quiet evening with each other. They never returned. Soran was only seven then.
Soran was later sent to stay in an orphanage. The pain of losing his parents manifested itself in the form of drastic changes in his personality. The once cheerful boy became withdrawn and moody, unwilling to speak to anyone.
The boy was eventually adopted by the Seieis, and given his current name of Setsuna F. Seiei.
Setsuna’s relationship with his adoptive parents has not always been smooth, but he has undoubtedly grown to love them. With their support, he has moved on from the deaths of his biological parents and has been able to enjoy a largely normal adolescence.
Journal-Entry RP Sample:
To-do list:
1. Preparation of notes for project discussion
2. Project Discussion
Meeting venue: Library
Time: 2 pm
3. Telephone Call to Mother
Time: 8 pm
4. Checking of arrival date of plastic model kits
Time: Free period
Today will be busy.
Edit
Ryouko just informed me that the discussion has been postponed. It will be on Friday instead. Same place, library.
I have free time now. I shouldgo to the shop to check if there are new items available for pre-orders complete the assignment due next week.
Third-Person RP Sample:
”Yeah well, if you do it this way, it wouldn’t work out. It looks good on paper, but there’s too many flaws in the design.”
“He has a point.”
“Guys!! A new phone model is going to be released next month!!”
“New phon-…you don’t mean…?”
“Yes!!”
Setsuna blinked, seeing his group mates swarm around Jun, all of them jostling for a better view of the magazine that she was holding in her hand. A look of annoyance flickered over his features for a moment, leaving as quickly as it appeared. This was the third time that they were distracted by matters that were not related to their project and he knew that it would be a long while before his group mates settled down enough to want to continue their discussion.
They were getting increasingly louder in their casual conversation over a cell phone. He frowned, shutting out their chatter and focusing on his part of the discussion. At the rate they were trudging along, they would not be able to complete the project before the deadline next month.
This was why he preferred working alone. Working alone meant he had no need to consult group mates over decisions that he could otherwise quickly settle by himself. Working alone meant he could complete an assignment as soon as possible without having to deal with distracted classmates.
He tapped his notes with the tip of his ballpoint pen, occasionally scribbling down possible topics to expand on whenever they returned to discussion. He gazed over at his classmates again, seeing that they had already finished their conversation and were already returning back to their seats. Well, that was faster than he had thought, not that he minded.
He watched as the others finally settled down, resuming their debate over one of the suggested designs. Working alone had its merits, then again, he would not totally discredit his group mates either. When they were working, they were serious about it, and they were responsible in completing their own tasks as well. They were good people too.
Not that he would ever tell them. He gazed down at his notes, quietly noting down their discussions.
Have you read the Guidelines? Yes.
And Anya's D: She hasn't appeared much, so I took a bit more liberties than I should. Help me see if her personality is still ok. ;_;
Anya Alstreim
OOC Information
Player's Name/Nickname: Tari
Age: 18
Journal: ratiosu
AIM or Email:
Aim – amethyst bunny
Email – messiah_dragonair@yahoo.com.sg
RP Experience:
-3 years of LJ RPing
-Currently playing Setsuna F. Seiei, Neena Trinity and Rollo Lamperouge in Purgatorium
Character Information
Name: Anya Alstreim
Series/Fandom: Code Geass: Hangyaku no Lelouch R2
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Student or Faculty Member/Professor: Student, Year 2
Major: Digital Filmmaking & Video Production
Minor: -
Occupation: -
Appearance:
The red-eyed girl sports pink wavy hair which she usually ties into a high ponytail. Most times, she wears a black tank top, short enough to reveal her abdomen, paired with white short pants. She also wears a white and sleeveless coat, which reaches her knees, over her tank top. Her choice of footwear is black boots and dark pink stockings which reach her upper thighs. She has black gloves which reach her lower arm, but the gloves do little to cover the large red tattoo which covers almost her entire left arm.
Personality:
Anya is a quiet and introverted. Her dreamy expression often gives others the impression that she is detached from reality. Actually, she is highly observant of her surroundings and quite sensitive to other people’s emotions.
One of Anya’s most prized possessions is her cell phone. She keeps it with her all the time. The cell phone is able to take photos, videos and allow her to have access to the Internet, thus making it her best and most favourite accessory. Anya is somewhat obsessed with taking photos and videos to record every moment of her life because she is afraid of forgetting anything. Therefore, she is often seen tinkering with her phone, recording anything that catches her interest.
History:
Anya was born into a wealthy family. Her father is a financial advisor, and her mother, a banker. Due to the fact that her parents hold rather demanding jobs, Anya rarely interacts with them. Her parents try to make up for the lack of interaction time by giving her large allowances and satisfying her materialistic wants. Anya loves her parents, and appreciates that they work hard so that they can all enjoy a good standard of living, but she sometimes wish that they could spend a bit more time with her.
Anya has had a normal and comfortable life. She is also quite sheltered and thus, there are many things about the world that she does not fully comprehend.
Journal-Entry RP Sample:
I went out with my friends today.
We went to the new café that opened recently.
Sera ordered one of their special items.
Looks delicious, doesn’t it?
Sera let me have the cherry.
The cherry is sweet.
I want to go to that café again.
I have homework to finish.
Maths is the first lesson again tomorrow.
…boring.
Third-Person RP Sample:
Propping her chin with a hand, Anya gazed straight at the lecturer, her mind slowly blocking out his monotonous drone. Her free hand snaked into her pocket, and after a glance at the lecturer to make sure he was not looking in her direction, she took out her cell phone and slide it open, gazing at it.
Just one more minute left to the end of lesson.
“That’s all for today. We’ll continue with the rest of the chapter tomorrow.”
Anya blinked as the largely quiet lecture hall stirred and came to life with the idle chatter of the students, most of whom were probably discussing their after-school plans. Holding her cell phone with her left hand as she packed her notes with her right, she deftly typed out a line, her thumb pressing at the keypad.
Mr. Biage dismissed the class early today.
The lesson ended fifty seconds before the stipulated time.
She switched the phone over to her right hand and picked up her files with her left. Better make a move before the crowds choked up the hallway.
Save entry.
Anya remembered accidentally erasing one of her half-typed entries. The experience had been nothing short of horrific. In her mind, there was nothing more sinful than forgetting about things, especially moments of her life. Memories, good or bad, made up a person, and were thus very important. It was, to her, unforgivable if she lost any of her memories.
Leaving the building, she set foot on Evergrove’s sprawling campus grounds, feeling the warm rays of the sun on her skin.
Open draft.
The weather is good today.
She slid her phone shut and continued to walk on quietly, seemingly oblivious to her surroundings. She mentally ran through the list of work for the day. There were English assignments, theory papers and-
-a bee.
She stopped at the potted plants, having spotted the insect hovering near the flowers. Was it collecting nectar?
Immediately, she slid her phone open again, pressing the hotkey to its video-recording function, her attention now fully focused on the bee.
Hover, land, stop, collect, take off and hover again.
A completely instinctive and natural reaction for the bee, an interesting moment of discovery for Anya. She moved after the bee, recording its movements until she lost sight of it entirely.
At that, Anya paused, saving the video clip and reopening her saved draft.
Open draft.
Bees are interesting creatures…
Have you read the Guidelines? Yes.
evergrove_uni.Help me look through them and tell me what you think? ;_; I need critique on Setz's history especially.
Setsuna F. Seiei
OOC Information
Player's Name/Nickname: Tari
Age: 18
Journal: ratiosu
AIM or Email:
AIM – amethyst bunny
E-mail – messiah_dragonair@yahoo.com.sg
RP Experience:
-3 years of LJ RPing
-Currently playing Setsuna F. Seiei, Neena Trinity and Rollo Lamperouge at Purgatorium
Character Information
Name: Setsuna F. Seiei
Series/Fandom: Mobile Suit Gundam 00
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Setsuna is bisexual, but he leans a lot closer to heterosexuality.
Student or Faculty Member/Professor: Student, Year 1
Major: Engineering
Minor: -
Occupation: -
Appearance:
Standing at 162 cm and sporting an untidy mop of black hair, the lean young man does not stand out very much in a crowd. At first glance, his most striking physical features are his maroon eyes. Most of the time, his eyes and slim eyebrows are set in an aloof glance and his lips, a perpetual frown. Setsuna’s face usually does not betray his feelings but when he cracks, it is his eyes that show his true emotions.
He is often seen wearing a long-sleeved, collared white shirt paired with dark pants and black shoes, as well as a tight black sash around his waist. He sports a scarf, either a red or an off-white one, around his neck out of habit. On colder days, he wears a thin dark blue jacket over his shirt to keep himself warm.
Personality:
”Don’t touch me!!”
Setsuna is a taciturn individual who only speaks when talked to. He is slow in trusting others, preferring to rely on himself instead in dealing with problems. He does not have much interaction skills to speak of, and as a result, he does not have many friends. Setsuna also has issues with being physically touched and does not enjoy any sort of invasion into his private space. The young man holds a rather cynical view towards life.
April 7 – Aries
Setsuna does not believe in the use of diplomatic approaches to any arguments and would rather go head on with any confrontation with force. While he is quite capable of receiving instructions and obeying them, his attitude is very much “do first, explain later”. Due to his rashness, he often gets into trouble with family members and classmates alike.
History:
Setsuna was born as Soran Ibrahim to a businessman and a homemaker. He led a normal and happy childhood, until he lost his parents in a car crash. Placing their only son in the care of a good friend, they had left home, looking forward to a quiet evening with each other. They never returned. Soran was only seven then.
Soran was later sent to stay in an orphanage. The pain of losing his parents manifested itself in the form of drastic changes in his personality. The once cheerful boy became withdrawn and moody, unwilling to speak to anyone.
The boy was eventually adopted by the Seieis, and given his current name of Setsuna F. Seiei.
Setsuna’s relationship with his adoptive parents has not always been smooth, but he has undoubtedly grown to love them. With their support, he has moved on from the deaths of his biological parents and has been able to enjoy a largely normal adolescence.
Journal-Entry RP Sample:
To-do list:
2. Project Discussion
Meeting venue: Library
Time: 2 pm
3. Telephone Call to Mother
Time: 8 pm
Time: Free period
Today will be busy.
Edit
Ryouko just informed me that the discussion has been postponed. It will be on Friday instead. Same place, library.
I have free time now. I should
Third-Person RP Sample:
”Yeah well, if you do it this way, it wouldn’t work out. It looks good on paper, but there’s too many flaws in the design.”
“He has a point.”
“Guys!! A new phone model is going to be released next month!!”
“New phon-…you don’t mean…?”
“Yes!!”
Setsuna blinked, seeing his group mates swarm around Jun, all of them jostling for a better view of the magazine that she was holding in her hand. A look of annoyance flickered over his features for a moment, leaving as quickly as it appeared. This was the third time that they were distracted by matters that were not related to their project and he knew that it would be a long while before his group mates settled down enough to want to continue their discussion.
They were getting increasingly louder in their casual conversation over a cell phone. He frowned, shutting out their chatter and focusing on his part of the discussion. At the rate they were trudging along, they would not be able to complete the project before the deadline next month.
This was why he preferred working alone. Working alone meant he had no need to consult group mates over decisions that he could otherwise quickly settle by himself. Working alone meant he could complete an assignment as soon as possible without having to deal with distracted classmates.
He tapped his notes with the tip of his ballpoint pen, occasionally scribbling down possible topics to expand on whenever they returned to discussion. He gazed over at his classmates again, seeing that they had already finished their conversation and were already returning back to their seats. Well, that was faster than he had thought, not that he minded.
He watched as the others finally settled down, resuming their debate over one of the suggested designs. Working alone had its merits, then again, he would not totally discredit his group mates either. When they were working, they were serious about it, and they were responsible in completing their own tasks as well. They were good people too.
Not that he would ever tell them. He gazed down at his notes, quietly noting down their discussions.
Have you read the Guidelines? Yes.
And Anya's D: She hasn't appeared much, so I took a bit more liberties than I should. Help me see if her personality is still ok. ;_;
Anya Alstreim
OOC Information
Player's Name/Nickname: Tari
Age: 18
Journal: ratiosu
AIM or Email:
Aim – amethyst bunny
Email – messiah_dragonair@yahoo.com.sg
RP Experience:
-3 years of LJ RPing
-Currently playing Setsuna F. Seiei, Neena Trinity and Rollo Lamperouge in Purgatorium
Character Information
Name: Anya Alstreim
Series/Fandom: Code Geass: Hangyaku no Lelouch R2
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Student or Faculty Member/Professor: Student, Year 2
Major: Digital Filmmaking & Video Production
Minor: -
Occupation: -
Appearance:
The red-eyed girl sports pink wavy hair which she usually ties into a high ponytail. Most times, she wears a black tank top, short enough to reveal her abdomen, paired with white short pants. She also wears a white and sleeveless coat, which reaches her knees, over her tank top. Her choice of footwear is black boots and dark pink stockings which reach her upper thighs. She has black gloves which reach her lower arm, but the gloves do little to cover the large red tattoo which covers almost her entire left arm.
Personality:
Anya is a quiet and introverted. Her dreamy expression often gives others the impression that she is detached from reality. Actually, she is highly observant of her surroundings and quite sensitive to other people’s emotions.
One of Anya’s most prized possessions is her cell phone. She keeps it with her all the time. The cell phone is able to take photos, videos and allow her to have access to the Internet, thus making it her best and most favourite accessory. Anya is somewhat obsessed with taking photos and videos to record every moment of her life because she is afraid of forgetting anything. Therefore, she is often seen tinkering with her phone, recording anything that catches her interest.
History:
Anya was born into a wealthy family. Her father is a financial advisor, and her mother, a banker. Due to the fact that her parents hold rather demanding jobs, Anya rarely interacts with them. Her parents try to make up for the lack of interaction time by giving her large allowances and satisfying her materialistic wants. Anya loves her parents, and appreciates that they work hard so that they can all enjoy a good standard of living, but she sometimes wish that they could spend a bit more time with her.
Anya has had a normal and comfortable life. She is also quite sheltered and thus, there are many things about the world that she does not fully comprehend.
Journal-Entry RP Sample:
I went out with my friends today.
We went to the new café that opened recently.
Sera ordered one of their special items.
Looks delicious, doesn’t it?
Sera let me have the cherry.
The cherry is sweet.
I want to go to that café again.
I have homework to finish.
Maths is the first lesson again tomorrow.
…boring.
Third-Person RP Sample:
Propping her chin with a hand, Anya gazed straight at the lecturer, her mind slowly blocking out his monotonous drone. Her free hand snaked into her pocket, and after a glance at the lecturer to make sure he was not looking in her direction, she took out her cell phone and slide it open, gazing at it.
Just one more minute left to the end of lesson.
“That’s all for today. We’ll continue with the rest of the chapter tomorrow.”
Anya blinked as the largely quiet lecture hall stirred and came to life with the idle chatter of the students, most of whom were probably discussing their after-school plans. Holding her cell phone with her left hand as she packed her notes with her right, she deftly typed out a line, her thumb pressing at the keypad.
Mr. Biage dismissed the class early today.
The lesson ended fifty seconds before the stipulated time.
She switched the phone over to her right hand and picked up her files with her left. Better make a move before the crowds choked up the hallway.
Save entry.
Anya remembered accidentally erasing one of her half-typed entries. The experience had been nothing short of horrific. In her mind, there was nothing more sinful than forgetting about things, especially moments of her life. Memories, good or bad, made up a person, and were thus very important. It was, to her, unforgivable if she lost any of her memories.
Leaving the building, she set foot on Evergrove’s sprawling campus grounds, feeling the warm rays of the sun on her skin.
Open draft.
The weather is good today.
She slid her phone shut and continued to walk on quietly, seemingly oblivious to her surroundings. She mentally ran through the list of work for the day. There were English assignments, theory papers and-
-a bee.
She stopped at the potted plants, having spotted the insect hovering near the flowers. Was it collecting nectar?
Immediately, she slid her phone open again, pressing the hotkey to its video-recording function, her attention now fully focused on the bee.
Hover, land, stop, collect, take off and hover again.
A completely instinctive and natural reaction for the bee, an interesting moment of discovery for Anya. She moved after the bee, recording its movements until she lost sight of it entirely.
At that, Anya paused, saving the video clip and reopening her saved draft.
Open draft.
Bees are interesting creatures…
Have you read the Guidelines? Yes.