Seeking fanart opinions

[ratiosu]

More SetsuSaji, but I just need opinions. DD:


1.
Yeah, Saji's hair got cut off. xD";; I just cropped this from the original pic though, so no worries.

2.

Which pic looks better and less weird? Saji's fingers, do redraw or not?


Opinions?

Dawww Christina ♥

Comments

[xiao-baka.livejournal.com]

The second picture is better, but Saji's fingers are tiny. ._. When I rest my hand on my own shoulder, it occupies almost the entire space.

[ratiosu.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I thought as much. x_X";; Thanks for your input!! :D

[x-evelyn-x.livejournal.com]

1st one?

[ali-chama.livejournal.com]

I would say #1~

[chuukoku.livejournal.com]

Setsuna's face look better on 2, but Saji's body looks better on 1? (Don't know if that sounds right o__o; ) Everything else looks more or less even :]

For the hand, you might have to redraw. You might have to find a picture that has the hand positioned like that in order to ref it correctly as well ^^

[jounetsu-ryu.livejournal.com]

I like how Setsuna's scarf came out in the first picture. I do agree with xiao_baka that Saji's fingers are tiny. And it might just be me, but Setsuna's eyes bother me a bit. I can't pinpoint the reason why though XD;

[misshallelujah.livejournal.com]

Both pics have their merits but the first one looks better to me.

Make Saji's fingers bigger, and make them overlap over Setsuna's shoulder more (i.e. give them more volume).